Evaluation- Activity 4

I aimed for my TARGET AUDIENCE to be teenage 

girls, around 13- 17, that are still at school and live at home with their parents. 

Their interests would be going out with friends, going shopping, sleepovers, going cinemas, out for dinner and may also have interests in sports but spend allot of their time socialising with friends and family. 
She would listen to all the latest song, on radio stations such as kiss 100 and capital, her favorite style maybe hip hop and r&b. As she is supported by her mum and dad she would shop in shops such as topshop, river island, miss selfredgies, H&M and new look. Then after socialising and school she may come home to relax and watch t.v programs such as Hollyoaks, Keeping up with the Kardashians and Gossip girl. Her favorite channel would be E- entertainment on sky, also E4 and Living.

For the perfect audience, they would be single and be supported by their mum and dad financially, as they do not have a wide knowledge of the world and could get into the same situation as the character in the film. This sort of audience i would want to attract, would hopefully relate to them the most as the young girl represents allot of

the teenage generation.

I have also received FEEDBACK from a 16-17 year old audience, where a few people have viewed my film from going on to my blog and writing constructive criticism of what i have done well also on how i need to improve... I fist of finished my film with out putting in the voice over from the young girl, however when asking a few people what they thought it seemed to be unclear, by adding in the voiceover the opening makes allot more sense and leaves the audience guessing what's going to happen next.

I feel that the comments writing by the people who have viewed my film are fair and i would improve on some things if i was to do it again, for example a few more shots of expression and maybe a clearer understanding of what they are talking about over facebook.