Saturday, 1 January 2011

Evaluation- Activity 7



Looking back at my prelim task HOW HAVE I IMPROVED to my full product?




Wide shot
Medium Close up














                                                                                  
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Behind zooming in shot


Close up
Long shot walking towards camera
Medium close up
When looking back at my prelim task i feel that my filming has improved dramatically, the prelim task really helped i could see where i needed to improve certain aspects of filming as the clip didnt seem to flow very well, which made things come natural when filming the opening scene, for example the 180 degree rule (making sure the two characters in the scene have the same left or right relationship with each other) also match on action shots. I felt this came in really handy as i had a rough idea when we filmed our prelim tasks, which helped when filming our opening sequence. Also where we had done filming previously, being steady with the camera and thinking of suitable and interesting shots also felt more natural, which made the outcome of our opening sequence more realistic and intertaining to watch. I feel that my shots used in my opening sequence comparing to my prelim task are allot more adventurous as i had more close ups zooming in and different angles from in which i took my footage. i done this through a matter of trial and error discovering what looked right and fitted with what was happening in the scene for example the extreame close up of the man putting on the black gloves as it highlighted to the audience something bad was going on. In comparison to the prelim task i had viewed more footage and opening sequences to films that left the veiwer wanting to see more this gave me allot of inspiration for my film, giving me more ideas when coming to film as i knew what looked good and worked well.

In comparison to the editing i felt that i have now really got to grips with how to use Premiere pro and spent allot longer working with the software, the editing played quite a dramatic part through my opening sequence on the other hand my prelim task was only a short clip requiring few cuts and i did not put in any effects. However due to the requirments of my opening sequence i had spent allot more time making things perfect adding in firstly a title that blurs in and out in red straight away adding tension then a transition that fades into the film from a black screen, i did not have any other transitions untill the end where the film fades out as i felt it would loose the atmosphere that was being created and take the audience away from what was going on in the film and make the film look un realistic, i saw this when i was researching as more comic and exadgerated films would use more transitions for example mean girls, juno and superbad. Also adding in a voiceover left the audience knowing a little bit of how the girl felt, when editing the voice over i changed the pitch and tone by adding in an effect that allowed you to adjust the sound, i done this to make the voice sound inocent to leave the audience feeling sorry for the girl. there was also many cuts throughout the film and titles that were straight foward as i had previously learnt them through exparience. 
Behind zooming in shot
Medium Close up




Medium shot
                                              
                                                       Over shoulder shot


 
                                                                                                            Over shoulder shot


            
                                                                               
                                                                                Medium wide shot
                                                             





Medium shot

Tuesday, 23 November 2010

Looking back at my planning

When looking back on my planning i can see that not everything went the same on the day as i decided to add in my voiceover i felt that taking out allot of the script would add in more tension, and the voiceover felt allot more dramatic i also cut out allot of the footage even though i filmed it i felt it was too long and dragged the story line out allot more and took away the focus of the film. 

Saturday, 20 November 2010

Asset List

Throughout my opening sequence I will need:


A young Girl
The young girls mum
The young girls dad
A young Boy
The young boys dad


Camera
Tape
Tripod
Charger


Filming in two different houses, making sure there is two computers, and all the cast wearing casual clothes, also a pair of black gloves will be needed.

Friday, 19 November 2010

Opening sequence- Script

In shot...

3- girl 'sighing'
5- mum " all ready now, lets go"
6- dad "its cold out there put on you warm coat"... mum "Ok then... Lia were leaving now we wont be long" ( Lia calling down the stairs "Ok bye")
15- Boy answers phone " meet you on the corner ill be five minuets.. Ok bye"
17- Girl " Sighing"
18- Boy " Dad going to meet my mates now be back in a couple of hours" ... (dad shouts back " alright son  stay safe")
26- Dad "quietly laughing"
27- Girl puts on music "sings along to song"
34- Dad "The fun starts now"

Thursday, 18 November 2010

Shot List For Final Title Sequence

  1. Close up- of a clock ticking
  2. Medium shot- of dad looking at clock waiting for mum
  3. Medium shot- of girl looking at clock (bored)
  4. Close up- of dads hands tapping on the side
  5. Wide shot- of mum opening door telling dad she is ready
  6. Long shot- (down a hall way) of mum and dad getting ready to leave
  7. Close up- of front door shutting
  8. Long shot- of stairs, girl running down them towards camera
  9. Medium shot- of girl entering computer room  
  10. Close up- of facebook camera zooming out
  11. Camera continues to zoom out until over shoulder shot- camera focusing on computer screen (chat)
  12. Close up- of a boys face
  13. Over shoulder shot- behind boy looking at the convosation
  14. Close up- of girls hands typing
  15. Wide shot- of boy getting ready
  16. Close up- of the convosation on facebook
  17. Close up of girls face (disappointed)
  18. Wide shot- of son saying bye to dad ready to meet friends
  19. Close up- of hand opening front door
  20. Medium shot- of door shutting
  21. Extreme close up- of dads eyes
  22. Medium/ wide shot- of dad entering boys room
  23. Medium shot- of dad sitting at the computer ( facebook still logged on) starts talking to girl
  24. Close up of girls face
  25. Over shoulder shot (girl) looking at computer screen
  26. Extreme close up of dads smile
  27. Wide shot of girl getting ready
  28. Close up of dads hands rubbing together
  29. Medium shot of girl at the computer happy
  30. Close up of dad putting black gloves on
  31. Long shot of girl putting of coat and scarf
  32. Medium shot of man opening door
  33. Close up of girl closing door 
  34. Close up of man out side his house
  35. Long shot of girl walking down the street and waiting at edge of road
END




Tuesday, 16 November 2010

Storyboard For Final Title Sequence


This is a photo of me working on my blog
I have choosen my first initial idea, as i feel it is more realistic to the audience watching, as it is something that happens daily and is so terrible and shocking.
These are a rough outline of the shots that will be in my final title sequence, and in roughly the right order.